its never nice to see a mix of ripped sprites overtweening and bad comedy.
For your next video try to actual write jokes for every letter instead of just random BS. Random can get you through the door but its not funny for long.(BTW how did this get a score over 2.0 (currently 3.07) i suspect somones 5ing there vid every day because most videos like this barely crawl in with a 1.0
well let me summarize it
animation: i simpathize for you because until i got a tablet all my art looked like that too 0/10
script: honestly if you could write more orrigional plot your scripts are good and there were some ok jokes 5/10
voice acting; yours... not the best... your new to english so i can understand... the funnyest part was hearing edd and all of them do great voicing but still use your grammar that made me laugh 6/10
jokes: alot of them... bad but a few made me laugh 2/10
altogether i have to say even if your using a mouse put more effort into your animations think about it like this (unless your a super good/fast drawer/animator) if its super easy and takes no time at all , it probly doesnt look good
best of luck Nateofwar
it was good but alittle easy..
also on the page where it gives you brain age it say
"if your actual age is less than you brain age" good
"if your brain age is older than your actual age" bad
kinda contradictory eh
well another stick figure collab... oh boy...
but at least this one was done pretty well and i did laugh a few times
"axes are over rated" lol
Well you gotta expect...
for a movie called "QUEERS" of war it shud be obvious that theres gunna be alota dick in it...
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