needs polishing
well let me summarize it
animation: i simpathize for you because until i got a tablet all my art looked like that too 0/10
script: honestly if you could write more orrigional plot your scripts are good and there were some ok jokes 5/10
voice acting; yours... not the best... your new to english so i can understand... the funnyest part was hearing edd and all of them do great voicing but still use your grammar that made me laugh 6/10
jokes: alot of them... bad but a few made me laugh 2/10
altogether i have to say even if your using a mouse put more effort into your animations think about it like this (unless your a super good/fast drawer/animator) if its super easy and takes no time at all , it probly doesnt look good
best of luck Nateofwar
2/5 2/10